Reviewing: Interactive Learning Resource
POD:Pod 9
Them:Sleep During COVID 19
Member in group:Jiyu Wang, Shuhao Jiang, Xiaoying Wu.
Reviewer:Yuanyuan Guo
Hello, Jiyu, Shuhao, Xiaoying!
First of all, thank you very much for sharing your blog with me. Your pos did a great job. I like and enjoy it and learn a lot of new content. I like the pictures on the front page of your blog, and the design of the little moon and so on. They have a sense of substitution and let students quickly enter your study topic.Before reading your blog, I was very curious about your topic. At first, I thought it was just a matter of attention during sleeping or epidemic. To my surprise, you have found so many relevant details. For example, Restless legs syndrome (RLS),Narcolepsy…etc. For the Narcolepsy part ,which is also my deep experience during the epidemic. I never knew it was a disease.
Here are some of my suggestions. If I have any mistakes, please correct them.
- First of all, I think your pod could put a screenshot of the web page in the technology choices section or use guide and explain how to use your technology section.
- Secondly, I think you can add some links in this part, so that students can click directly in your blog and start learning. I believe it will have a better effect, and it will also give students some guidance to let them know how to use it or where to start their study.
- Finally, I think you can add your reference and the link of the reference at the bottom of each page so that students can adapt quickly.
I think your overall blog structure is already very good, just need to improve some designs in detail. Students or other users can get more convenient, fast and comprehensive content. These are all my suggestions.
I hope my suggestions can help you. If you think my suggestions are insufficient or have any questions about them, please contact me in time. Finally, thank you for your sharing. I really like your topic section blog
-Victoria Guo